Girlz

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Oct 2002 · 12 comments

There are these 2 girls and I love them more then anything They have everything I want And nothing but them is anymore important to me But there of coarse are some problems Ones that arent easy to fix I try my best to solve em But of coarse I cant get rid of the pricks let alone this one bitch Who, used to be my friend Until she got pissed Made one mistake And she put me on "THE LIST" So now Angie isnt my friend All because I went wrong Terryn made my life miserable Wished at first I didnt belong But then I look at the good side Happy the other girl I love is still my friend And try to make sure This friendship wont end.

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[5] limonade 16-Oct-02/5:21 PM Reply

There are these two girls and I love them more than anything
They have everything I want
And nothing but them is anymore important to me

But there of course are some problems
Ones that are not easy to fix
I try my best to solve them
But of course I can't get rid of the pricks let alone this one bitch

Who, used to be my friend
Until she got pissed
Made one mistake
And she put me on "THE LIST"

So now Angie isn't my friend
All because I went wrong
Terryn made my life miserable
Wished at first I didnt belong

But then I look at the good side
Happy the other girl I love is still my friend
And try to make sure
This friendship won't end.

(I took the liberty of correcting your spelling)

[0] horus8 4-Dec-02/4:30 PM Reply

can i ask you a sincere question? WHAT IN THE FUCK ARE YOU BABBLING ABOUT, AND WHAT EXACTLY CONVINCED YOU SPECIFICALLY speaking, THAT ANYONE SERIOUS ABOUT WRITING WOULD GIVE A FUCK?!

[0] razorgrin 5-Dec-02/12:45 PM Reply

thank you for proving that the crap poeme-pump is still in service.

[0] smlink84 26-Feb-04/9:01 PM Reply

if I beat myself into a delusional state, would I then understand why you wrote this and whatyou expected?

[0] SweetJuliet10 13-May-04/11:12 PM Reply

so what u got dumped get the fuck over it..... ya know i would tell you to get a blow up doll but she would proly leave your titty baby whinning ass too! ~0~

[0] SweetJuliet10 13-May-04/11:15 PM Reply

oh yea one more thing.... the poem is suppose to be about 2 girls you love ... rite? well then there is "angie" and there is "Terryn" but at the end you say your happy the other girl you love is still your friend...... what the fuck...im lost i thought there was only 2 girls. oh wait did you already have a blow up doll? damn then i guess me telling you to go get one was a waste of my breathe.

[n/a] Torok 24-Jun-04/4:44 AM Reply

aww poor you being stuck on "THE LIST" seems terrible it must have affected you emotionally for you to have written a poem about it, not a terribly genius poem but still a poem none the less, maybe you should get help.

[1] arduinn 27-Jun-04/6:50 AM Reply

a number of grammatical errors and spelling mistakes..
maybe after you edit this and write something better.. i might just change my mind about my vote

[3] Brittanyy 6-Jul-04/10:33 AM Reply

As weird as this may seem I think this poem, if edited properly could have some potential. I don't know why people have to be so vicious in their comments though I mean hey, at least you gave it your best shot huh? Be constructive people!!

[n/a] LilMsLadyPoet › Brittanyy 31-Jul-05/6:17 AM Reply

Brittanyy...it does seem weird that you like this poem...uhm...constructive? OKAY! liljsmith87, YOU SHOULD NOT HAVE PICKED UP YOUR PENCIL OR PEN OR CRAYON. This is one of the worst things I have read in...uhm, forever. Sorry, but honest.

[1] TAMARAG67 23-Jul-04/2:57 PM Reply

it made me wince- i felt like it was written by an angry 13 year old with raging Jr.high hormones

[2] kingfisher 5-Aug-04/4:30 PM Reply

Sometimes life is simple. Us vs them.