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nothing could (Free verse) by nentwined nothing could hurt me
until I was hurt
and nothing could phase me
until I was shocked;
nothing could stop me
Up the ladder:
The wild runs
Down the ladder:
Come off with me Carly back into the city
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Posted: October 20, 2002 11:23 PM PDT; Last modified: October 20, 2002 11:23 PM PDTWeighted score: 7.0626354 Overall Rank: 178 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.228
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21-Oct-02/6:06 AM
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Good! I was worried about you, scared you had'nt seen the light of day for months! HA! you're alive! It is a deep cyberworld indeed. Please do not let it suck the marrow from your being and leave you a hallowed keyboard stroker. 8 for your dead end:)
Cunningly funny
and then you stopped.
excellent.
Had to think about this one. Sounds like 220 volt on that shock.
What could have been so shocking that you lost all forward momentum? O God no -- don't say it! It wasn't... it surely couldn't have been...
intersting......
-nessa 470 view(s)
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