horus820 Aug 2002

yes mojo, i totally agree with you on this one(i justy couldn't put my finger quite on it yet).z..i was waiting to ride the coat tails of someone elses comment into this evaluating this work of yours, cuz i couldn't figure out why i didn't quite get it, i mean it's cool to send the small minded to the dictionary over and over again, but you had me sprawling with your choice of huge cryptic words, and i know that razor grin is a very educated and well read young lady, and she uses the same sort of itinerary (she liked your use og fecund) in her methods of explaining her own writings (i love both of your guys stuff passionately honestly i do), but it is almost overwrought with power words and phrases and structured shape, it moves like an undiscovered deep sea creature, and that can be both good and bad...i'm waiting to vote on it until i piece it all together in a way that works for my need to see where it's been and where it's going, don't get me wrong, i'm still waiting to vote on it until i feel comfortable with it...you are a hell of a writer, and i have alot of respect for your poetry, cuz it demands it. few do..i will read it until i feel it..and then i'll vote..god bless the fecundity of restless desires in us all..s