god'swife27 May 2004

No. Yes. No...maybe. No, definitely no. Well if you made it about you, or some actual human experience instead of this kiddy story type thingy. You have skill, I'll grant you that, but why errant knights and dragons? And please don't scream allegory or deeper meaning because if there is any then you completely obscured it with your Dr. Suessian foolishness. Also, why do you say one of the fellows 'cleaned' dull weapons instead of 'sharpened'?

No, not even Spongebob, with his deprecatory charms, could salvage this. Well, maybe if you dressed him up as a Damsel-in-distress. Give it a whirl.