poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Bitter bacardi makes the black stones dance. by SupremeDreamer.

Sasha7 Jun 2004

Oh, and you henceforth have no right to pontificate about stuffy "classic" style when you have talked about a "hat so drear." What's worse though is that you've done it in a poem with "rollin'" and " 'cause" sprinkled through it. It's jarring to say the least.