Shuushin10 Jul 2004

this expression, "to plant one's fancy" - is this a euphamism for something...?

this phrase "passion to dance like butterfly on " sounds very "English as a second language" - intention?

This would make 5 or 6 very nice poems (if taken with something lighter in between sittings), but as it is - its a bit tedious, imho. Maybe too effective at evoking defeat.