Shuushin16 Jul 2004

Very nice meter, though I'd re-touch the end of the first line of stanza two.

The subject is "pimply", but I've seen a worse applications of it.

If you're up to it, I'd notch the agony level down a bit, maybe with some images that either describe this feeling you want to convey, or something else.

Or, as an intermediate fix, make the last stanza focus soley on the remedy while keeping the second to last as a transition from this agony to hope.