poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Gap-Fold vs. Sour Milk by Venus.

Shuushin27 Jul 2004

I think with one "unlike now/...different life once" set and some indentation for that section it would make it pretty clear?

you might also set it up like a lyric, using that set (plus a bit more) as a chorus then a bridge to set up the last bit.

That could work too, I think.