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ReplyTo a comment on The Ultimate~Creep goes to Mecca! by Bachus.

horus824 Aug 2002

the style is "pro-se'o-me" with a bit of fantasy reality lisp..the mecca stuff is opium pipe dreams from a flat i lived in in detroit circa 1993 after i got out of the navy and was sculpting metal and painting and writing hence 'squating' (that's real) the somalian stuff of course true, the poetry parts glue it together and the ending naturally every boys nightmare pre-tru-love at sixteen (his dog's death mocked)...thank you for your fondness jade...you made bachus smile merlot fangs and oil his pan pipe....my dog was half wolf and labrador (black) his name was thor...this piece is for the lt. and my bestest pet..."for thor"...its "thor's belly dancing whore" may he rip. a-men...now sin sinners sin'e.........