thepinkbunnyofdoom7 Sep 2004

Ryhme Scheme? a-b-a-b a-b-c-b a-b-c-d? What are you thinking? Details? Him, Them, gonna be great, what the hell? Add some. Potential is there just really sloppy writing. This isn't one of those poems that was ment to be so crypticly vague that even the writer won't know what its about after a week or two is it?

-3- for now. Rewrite, Rewrite, and Rewrite. Your words and depth will only get better because of it.

<3 Jason