poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Marlowe, Raleigh, INTRANSIT (God speaks) by INTRANSIT.

Dovina18 Oct 2004

This is the craziest thing I've seen you write, starting with the title. (And btw, welcome back) What on earth are you trying to say with these mushy, flowery, King James words? "and all the world and love are young"? Really! And "enjoyest thee" must surely mean 'enjoy thou.' And "steepy mountain yields" means something I'm sure. "Roses and posies" is a bit lik saying 'women and people.'

Oh, yo're pulling our collective legs, aren't you? The last line is lol.