poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Limbs by Dovina.

richa11 Dec 2004

and if I were to converse more plainly I would say you use two verbs in four (incomplete?) sentences which seems a bit stingy. 'The live oak limbs hang crooked' sounds so much more like a sentence than the stunted 'live oak limbs-(=) Crooked'.