poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The wreck of a Memphis-Atlanta Greyhound by zodiac.

zodiac17 Dec 2004

Obviously, I didn't really fly through a window. I obviously wasn't in Tennessee, either, but I needed a bathroom for the old man, and there's nothing doing of the kind here.

Incidentally, the reason I'm defending this poem so much is I think it's the first thing I've written in ages that doesn't contradict itself every three lines. You'd have done better to start with an earlier one, I think.