poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Snowcone Man by Zalev.

Shuushin4 Jan 2005

a well made Acrostic to be sure - barely forced at all, really - okay, the "D" is forced. Maybe

"Death took the snowconeman, and my smile." -
or "Death took the snowconeman and he took my smile." - something like that?

and try "You want buy one?", he'd..." (should at least be in quotes).

Either way, nicely done, and an acrostic to boot.