poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Snowcone Man by Zalev.

Dovina4 Jan 2005

It's hard to make everything fit into an acrostic, so a won't complain too much about the relevance of torn sneakers and old clothes to his giving you a snow cone. I agree with Shuushin, it's a good acrostic. Try "Snow cone" in line 5 and "Death is my smile and the snowconeman."