Bhaskaryya5 Jan 2005
That was an excellent poem!1 I hope to reach that level someday..I am just a beginner.
Here is a parallel acrostic by my friend...
Treasuring the past I tired to stay in a distant desert, buT
He came and erased the tenebrous days from my memoiR
Only a few momentsâ feelings made us, âusâ from him and I
Marked with uncertainty our love stayed, hushed and virgiN.
Anticipating the recondite dream to bloom as a new epiC,
Smilingly, with open arms, always love waited on our waY
Loving a person with out seeing is not a simple committaL
Optimistically he waited till I revealed that I love him toO
Virtue of prayers must have forced us to divulge our luV
Else, how these feelings didnât get erased in the cruise of lifE
Serendipity is what that kept this relation together, alwayS
Time or space couldnât wreck a love carved deep in hearT
Revolving on the orbits of life, to see an eclipse I did wisH
I could feel emotions growing like a crescent to a full halO
Neglecting all the hurdles of life, love was declared for hiM
Capitulating in his arms, my spirit found complete euphoriA
Yearning to meet this eternal love I wait across seven seaS
Trincy loves thomas and thomas loves Trincy