Shuushin5 Feb 2005

Hwy wilco - overall it has a nice presence, but it didn't sink in until the end. Feature or bug?

I was thinking that each of those stanzas could be on their own, even expanded into more - then I hit the chorus and it gelled. So I guess you could go either way with it.

consuming/consumes - I struggled with that a little. Did you try it the other way too?