poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Hunger by Dovina.

richa21 Feb 2005

In free verse each line should always be semi-independent from the preceeding text i.e. it should stand on its own, therefore the instructions should be to you not the reader. Other than that be wary of using labels for abstractions 'mental formulations' 'volition'. It is always better to show than tell.