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ReplyTo a comment on The Sidekick Retires From Fairview's Finest by luzrheroguy.

juliharrelson19 Mar 2005

I really like the first verse a lot. It's smooth and clear:

"My best was never enough
Against you at your worst
I'm always a close second
Compared to your first"

I like how it rhymes just here and there without sounding fake or funky. It sounds like it just flowed out that way.