gregsamsa22220 Mar 2005

hey--thanks, really, for all the thoughts on this poem. I posted it in july and kinda forgot about the site--suddenly i'm getting responses about it. I think the poem needs some work, and know it's not The Best Poem Ever, so critical input is appreciated. Plus... i must admit, if it inspires anyone to think about it longer than it takes to read it makes me feel as if I've managed to get SOMEthing across.