poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Spanish Woman by James Rykelangeli.

thepinkbunnyofdoom2 Apr 2005

V4 L5 "Willow Hair". Good use of the word urticant. Although with the help of translation 3, I couldn't help but think crabs.

Your use of diapason just seems wrong to me. At first I thought it was a typo, but after a second glance, I got curious. Was there a reason for diapason, as opposed, to anything else meaning the full range? Not that it matters, but I just thought it an ill chosen word. -9-

<3 Jason