poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Everything by RION12.

thepinkbunnyofdoom2 Apr 2005

You are boring me. V1L2 do you really mean to say, You are my weakness? I know I'm one to talk about cliches, but come one. Here is a rewrite just to give you Ideas.

You're my tourniquet
You're my medication
You make my head spin merry go round dizzy
You're everything I want

You make my devils turn to dust
You make the sky above sing a happy tune
You make this cage into a castle
You are everything I want

The trick to not boring someone to tears is keeping them interested in what you are saying. -4-

<3 Jason