poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Cold Feet by gregsamsa222.

thepinkbunnyofdoom3 Apr 2005

Line 3, some ....'s after just would probably make it work better(I didn't like how 3 flows to 4 really). Do something other than end 3 on just. I like how this aside sounds like something I could imagine myself saying to one of my buddies on a car ride home. -8-

<3 Jason