poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Looking Over the Blueprints by somemorepoetry.

thepinkbunnyofdoom15 Apr 2005

"Of every line, every anlge, every beam and bolt"

Angle perhaps?

Dovina's right, but I think there was some wonderful craftmanship here. I loved the Wife bit, but I think it's too easy to skip over the subtle comparison of how he was more exact with his work, than his love life.

<3 Jason

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