ho_hum19 Apr 2005

Why not stop banging your head against a brick wall on poemranker.com, and start your own site called angstyteenagerapranker.com. Do you want to be the next Eminem or something?

This one, however, did make me laugh. So you get a 5 for it. You lose marks for it being just a bit too much like 'Stan' by Eminem in terms of the sheer amount of ranting rage. Take it easy.

Actually you can get a 6 for the unexpected Deng Xiaoping reference, although you should capitalise proper nouns.

Fuck not f*ck.