poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Void by darylchew.

zodiac3 May 2005

You'd do better to write this without some of the punctuation:
- no comma after 'letter'
- no comma after 'imagination'
- no semicolon after 'depicts'
- no comma after 'trains'
- no comma after 'story'

Go ahead, tell me you did it on purpose.