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ReplyTo a comment on Void by darylchew.

thepinkbunnyofdoom3 May 2005

The first two lines, were losing me, but by the last verse I really I was blown away.

"You read me a story, of true love in a false land;
but aren't we vulnerable when we're on our own?"

Love that line. Enough to be a 10.

<3 Jason