Bachus31 Aug 2002

1) i have seen you many times appologize, not for your poetry, but for forgeting a line out of it while you were orating,(melrose coffee house last year, whittier coffe house 4 or five years ago) and i'm just saying...fuck the line, nobody knows but you, replace it with a random connecting thought.improv, act, retract...nobody want's to hear anyone read something from a paper or from the inside of their minds...here's a thought ..relive it each time anew...it stays fresher, 2)and what kind of advice to you suggest i give to some of these kids...huh..your creative writing lesson of the week?...i fucking help the ones that i can, in a more creatively inspiring manner, by making them think in outside terms? this is not a poetry workshop for fucking teaching cads and cretans it's poemranker...there is no need to sit and explain to them all , "hi, i'm god's wife i think you should listen to more t-rex and read blah blah dickinmouth ble. here capitalize this, erase that, stasnza blee.....cuz i'm god's wife which makes it what. worthy? wow you're right sorry, after all your god's wife...... okay here ye here ye the wife of id will be selecting a group of twits for a good grinding all aboard!...some shit just isn't that easy...you either got it, or you don't. you do, and so does babbit,and dark angel isn't at all a serious writer?, and neither is bachus? or whitman? or shaskowski? cuz they're just playing? fuck that this is a forum, fight or sit in the stands, but teach in another corner that's your job not mine. i say push until pulled!