poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The cry of the Locust by nothingtoanyone.

zodiac10 May 2005

Dear Christ.

You can't say "Now thy will hold everything". You can say, "Now thou willest hold everything", or "Now thou wilst hold everything", or "Now thy will holds everything". But you probably shouldn't.

Also, "strikith" should be "striketh". And why are you talking like some drunken Cotton Mather?