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ReplyTo a comment on Old Lady and The Sea by Joe-joe.

INTRANSIT16 May 2005

Are you trying for a sonnet? Look at Beam Reach and compare it to The Catamaran. Both are mine, the catamaran being the first draft. You can hear the diff easily. " A comrade of the yawning deep " is excellent. 8. Hit it again.