Dovina26 May 2005
No, it is a failure as poem. Thanks for trying to interpret, but when four good poets fail to understand what I was talking about, it can only mean that I failed to be clear.
The body is complete because the life is complete. It is abolished because the life is gone, a no-breather because that leads to the punch word â no-brainrer â which has two meanings â a dead brain and a decision that requires little thought.