poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Micheal by Dreammaker1024.

DoubleU30 May 2005

Another female puppy, lapping at her master...
As an attempt to write a whole new sort of poetry, this fails, to say it polite. It's an excerpt from a schoolgirl's diary and nothing more. The only poetic detail I could find was 'kiss/bliss'. Sopping in your panties can be a state of bliss, yes, but it's hardly a poetic one.