zodiac6 Jun 2005

Do you mean "comes summer's answer" or "come summer's answers"? Or is there another subject somewhere I haven't noticed?

Would you consider dropping the last line? I liked it the first time, though. Really.

The title made me think of both the actual Smoky Mountains, in my home part of the world, and the Rocky Mountains of the song. Neither of which are referenced in the poem.

PS-I do wish you'd stop taking Shuushin's word about end-line punctuation.

PPS-Very good, overall.