poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Smoky Mountain High by Dovina.

Dan garcia-Black6 Jun 2005

The real differnce between the first stanza and the second is what the people at each place are seeing. In the second stanza all of us in LA are watching the bloody, red sun on television. Who goes outside in LaLaLand before sunrise? Oh yeah, sanitation workers, hookers going home to shootup and go to sleep and cops. Personally, I Tivo the 6 AM news just to see the sun.