poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Smoky Mountain High by Dovina.

Dovina9 Jun 2005

Summer is a fickle girl and may not answer the record rains of winter with record wildfire. But she could. For rhythm’s sake and for symmetry with the Mississippi Valley, the word "likely" could go. For keeping to what I want to say, something along that line is needed.