poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on A Kiss In Shadows (quite happy for me) by Caducus.

Caducus10 Jun 2005

GW CHILL.

Okay I changed the first bit - grammar and me divorced years back.

The 'my love' meant my girlfriend but i agree it sounds a bit gay and i bring her in to it later so it's not needed.

It's a draft and raw as the moment as intended. One of those inspired things that hit or miss, this is kind of both but was never meant to be anything to get anal about really.

Thanks for the pointers.