poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on quick by <~>.

Caducus15 Jun 2005

hey zzinnia long time huh?

I think I get this but 'deepening february afternoon'? If I'm right on my interpretation that line don't sit well.

The last 3 lines could verge into a senryu - mixed on this one but I'm gaga for an explanation.