poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on missing pieces by mystic enoch.

Bankrupt_Word_Clerk17 Jun 2005

well. step 1. Use a thesaurus. Broken -- busted -- wrecked -- bent -- bruised -- mangled -- tortured -- trashed --...

but don't say.. "Its all broken. Now I must fix this broken thing." eww. yuck. and "it's all broken" is bad too. try.. "it's broken"..

"You have crushed it
now I must tend this
mangled vessel." --