poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Father’s Day by Dovina.

DoubleU19 Jun 2005

Most men don't have to consider, they simply see what's happening with dad...
On the other hand; the son is always convinced he will NOT become his father, he'll do better. So the idea that his own core also will be revealed in the end, escapes him.

Interesting musings, but also disappointing, as a poem. Don't know why precisely.
The 'complained/content' antithesis jars somewhat.