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ReplyTo a comment on Submit by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk.

DoubleU25 Jun 2005

>>softer than a night in Wales on the Irish Sea.<<
...Where?
Unless some subtle joke escapes me?

There are nice moments, like line 3 and 4 and 8. But this really calls for good metrics, line 6 jars in that respect. And I don't like the frequent grindings to a halt.