poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on A Righteous Prayer by Dovina.

zodiac26 Jun 2005

I understood the punctuation as such. I still think it's messy. At the very least, "Grant now my petitions, for which I make claim" is horrendously overworded. And would you really, really say "I make claim for my petitions"? Would you really say "I've kept something with passion for religion"?