Joshua_Tree28 Jun 2005

Verse 4, line 2 points back to the three types of fool in vv. 1-3. Now that you point out the weakness, I think it needs to be a little longer and mush more obvious.

Verse 1, line 4 lost its time indicator in an edit that I should have reverted. There are plenty of empty words in that line that can be bumped for the needed clarity.

Your comments are considered and insightful. Such feedback is the reason that I tolerate certain others.