poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Object of the Game by Dovina.

Dovina30 Jun 2005

No, this android, though predictable, will not this time say what you expect. I see what you and shuushin mean about the first verse and will clarify it thus:

He wallows in hurt-
women who wronged him
Lovers so shallow they stab him on whims
leave the very next morning

The second verse is already clear, I think, but it changes from human to android. It ceases to pass for human as the first verse may.