poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Gratitude by Dovina.

Bankrupt_Word_Clerk3 Jul 2005

I have a little trouble with the 3rd to last line. "To pleasure" Pleasure is a noun. now pleasuring can be used intransitivly as a verb.. as well as pleasured.

you could say "be pleased in what the dead cannot" and you don't lose the beats.