poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on A Good Man Ruined by Dovina.

zodiac29 Jul 2005

That's not what I'm saying. I'm saying IF you wrote it for yourself, it's great (if a little overexposed). IF you didn't, I don't think it works. Saying I wrote this for people who think like me is the same as saying I wrote this for myself.

I don't think it's a necessarily unhealthy realisation, but the way I think it would be healthy is not the way it's set up in the poem.