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ReplyTo a comment on A rhyme with no place to go. by darby pyn.

LilMsLadyPoet31 Jul 2005

'malignant palms squeeze saturation
hieroglyphic masturbation.'
This line about graffiti is awesome! This is a strange poem, with layers that warrant repeated reads. I read it several times, and it grew on me more each time. Good job. Actually, it would make great lyrics I think!