poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on This Just In... by drnick.

LilMsLadyPoet31 Jul 2005

Expierience would say to use spell checker before posting...(just a hint!) Needs a comma after blood. A period ofter tears. That said...I just don't see the point of this one.
"It's a dark world,
or is it?
Can reality be so explicit?" <could be cut out, without any ill effects.