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ReplyTo a comment on How Angels Sleep by Dovina.

ALChemy20 Aug 2005

Beatiful: A word invented by ALChemy meaning full of beat or full of rhythm. Something with rhythm that's beautiful.

“She understood he knew her heart.” sounds OK but the repetition of heart sounds a little like Fred Durst trying to rhyme. I was thinking not a change so much as an addition. i.e. "and she knew he understood it's beat."