Sasha27 Aug 2005
The French poem from which I translated this has no punctuation either
Here are the first 6 lines in French, I've put punctuation marks in parentheses where they would normally be as prescribed by French writing conventions but aren't:
Sous le pont Mirabeau coule la Seine(,)
Et nos amours(,)
Faut-il qu'il m'en souvienne(?)
La joie venait toujours après la peine(.)
Vienne la nuit(,) sonne l'heure(.)
Les jours s'en vont(,) je demeure(.)
Yes, it's lyrical.