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ReplyTo a comment on I've often been known to make people laugh by T. Jonathron Remp.

LilMsLadyPoet2 Sep 2005

Ha- HA! Excellent...One thing though.. at>
"Twirl around and fondle your sister,
And disappear before she knew what had hit her,"
...it seems a little out of rhythm right there...perhaps?> "What'd hit 'er" to speed it up some?